TobiG

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

Ø  Both your metagaming and powergaming definitions are a little off- please revise these. It's a good idea to use the information from our Wiki pages, and to include examples.

Ø  You haven't included a character biography paragraph, please write one of these and be sure to include information such as family history, character personality and at least one lore reference.

Ø  Please describe your character's physical features in your character description.

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when reapplying. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!

Sure, thanks for the review! I will reply again when complete

Done editing.

I see you've made some great changes- Your metagaming definition is perfect now, and your character description is correct. I have a couple little things I'd still like you to fix however-

Ø  The powergaming definition is correct in essence, I'd just like for you to elaborate on it a bit more. The best place to find this info is on our wiki page relating to that :) https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

Ø  Could you please include one lore reference in your biography- this could be a place in Atlas in which your character has lived, or a world event that they have seen/experienced. Again, the Wiki is the place to find this info!

edit two done, thanks a ton!

Ø  Just One more little thing! I see you've included a lore reference- which is great! However, I've just read up on the particular lore you've used (Black Drake's men & Castle Greywynn) are both from Anthos, which is the map that we left about 200 years ago ICly. This wouldn't make sense given your character's age. I'd suggest picking a place or world event in which your character experienced.

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Atlas - The current map that we're on is Atlas, so you can grab some lore from this page and the nation wiki pages listed within it if you'd like :)

Oh no. It was in modern history so I forgot to check up on dates, sorry! editing now.

AAAAAA - - finally fixed, thanks again for your help

Hello there, your application has been,

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