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  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: applying your knowledge to your characters (ex : going to a secret location you saw someone mention in ooc)
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: doing an action that gives another play no chance to react (ex : "draws sword and kills x")
    Status: Accepted

Tylon was born 1649 in Senntisten a few years before the Crown of Renatus-Marna was astablished. He was trained in archery and sword at a young age becoming proficient in both by the age of 13. At 16 he wounded and nearly killed a stableboy for suggesting his father had been seen entering a brothel. When he reached 18 he had already developed a great desire for power and knowledge of the unknown such as magic, he now actively searches for both and will make allies of all races to achieve his goal.


Character Name: Tylon
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: average height, long white hair, & green eyes.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello! Your application has been placed under…


 

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A) Your eyes and hair do not match the race you have chosen, and therefore your skin does not match either. Your skin matches that of a High Elf or Snow Elf. I suggest reading on your chosen race's hair and eye color, and alter your skin to that.

B) Try to include at least one weakness and one strength in your interesting facts! This makes for a well-rounded character!


 

If any of the reasons you have been denied involve the Wiki, you may use this link to go straight to the home page. The home page has links to the power-emoting and meta-gaming definitions, as well as links to find the server lore you are looking for. Click here to go to the Wiki!


 

Fear not! Being placed under pending does not mean you have been denied. Your application is solid, but could use a few tweaks to help get your application stablized. You have 24 hours to implement the tweaks using the [Edit] feature on the forum. When you have made the changes, contact me (on the forums or on Discord) and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your application will be either Accepted or Denied. In the case of Denial, you will need to wait 3 hours before making another application.

 

I recommend joining the New Player Discord for assistance in finding answers. It is a helpful tool that will not only help during your application process but also help as a tool once you are implemented on the server.

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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Changed the skins hair to a lighter shade resembling white and the eyes to green. I added highly skilled in combat to my 2 slot of interesting facts however I was under the impression that my 1 slot answer would be sufficient as a weakness as would my 3 slot for strength since being too prideful can result in getting yourself killed if you're outmatched by a worthy adversary. If I'm wrong please correct me and I'll gladly change it to something non-personality trait related. 

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I'll accept the weakness as being pride under that explanation. 

 

Your application has been:

 

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On behalf of the Application Team and LoTC, I would like to be the first to welcome you to the server and our lovely community! You will be implemented shortly, and during this brief wait, I recommend you read through our Wiki to continue to familiarize yourself with the server lore!

 

I would also recommend you joining the New Player Discord and ask any questions you may have. It is a lovely tool to help you get started in the server and can be a great place to find help with anything you need!

 

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, on Discord (Sakura#8726) or on the server with /msg countessem command. You may also use /atreq to place a ticket for assistance with myself or any of the other Application Team staff!

 

I wish you the best!

 

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