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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: hunterzhunter
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To avoid power gaming I should say I attempt to shoot a bow at someone and make sure I only do things my character would know and not do actions just because I heard my friend say that was what they was going to do.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming ruins the fun for everyone. It can mess up cool plot points when your character does something that they really shouldn't know about.
    Status: Accepted

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


"He says with a soft tone" I am Krognag a Uruk from a distant clan from here, I am in this town to trade for resources I have many leathers and meats in my wagon. "He sighs loudly" My story? I was banish from my clan for falling in love with a human woman, My clan gave me mercy and just banished me since my father was a respected warrior among them. "He raises his voice in anger "Those bastards in town where my love was in wouldn't let me in just for my race. I know orcs have rage but I - "he starts getting even louder" MANAGE MY RAGE. "he starts getting less angry" I prove to them that I can be a useful orc in human world.


Character Name: Krognag
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 32
Physical Description: I am a Uruks, I'm 8'0 tall, I have brown skin, 650 pounds, my eyes are orange, and my clothing is basic leather armor.
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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

 

✿ Your powergaming method seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki. --->Here our definitions.

✿ Your app can not be accepeted until you have read the rules- https://www.lordofthecraft.net/rules/

 

✿ You may not Be half-olog. That is a creative application you may apply for after you are whitelisted.

 

✿Before you implement yourself as a half-orc, I would like for you to read what that might do for you—for character development as well as physical appearance. (Please click the spoiler or eye under this message and make your changes accordingly.

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Human/Orc

 

A Human/Orc Hybrid would exhibit both of the curses of Humans and Orcs. The Hybrid would live for 150 years at maximum, and would exhibit orcish bloodlust. They would be suffering from anger issues and bouts of raging attacks for the full duration of their shortened lifespan. Additionally, there are some unique physiological details for the Human/Orc Hybrids. Humans and Orcs exhibit extreme differences in physiology. This is less so for Humans and Goblins, but is very much so the case for Humans and Uruks. Ologs cannot produce half breeds. Human/Goblin Hybrids will have a relatively normal bone structure, but will have skin tinted between Human flesh and an “unnatural” Goblin color. Small tusks are common as well, though these do not always fit comfortably in their mouth. Human/Uruk Hybrids will have a more struggling physique. Their bone structure is a strange mix of that which is Human and that which is Uruk. This leads to a slouched and hunched posture the majority of the time, misshapen limbs, and strange bulky skulls. They gain no strength from this, only as strong as their Human half. Painful malformities, aching bones, arthritis, and many other conditions are common among Human/Uruk Hybrids. The skin tone would be tinted between Human flesh and an “unnatural” Uruk color. Larger tusks are common as well, though not as large as an Uruk’s. These tusks, too, tend to fit uncomfortably in the Hybrid’s mouth



 

✿Please make sure to include at least six sentences in the roleplay scenario! Its a great start! Make sure you are emoting in third person: "He said/she said/they moved." The roleplay scenario should be both action and dialogue.


 

You only have 48 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tigergiri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here!

If you need to contact me or need help, you can always join the LotC Discord here

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

Lastly, here is a link to the new player hub! New Player Hub

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Welcome to the server! We're thrilled to have you here, and I hope your time on Aevos is nothing short of amazing. If you ever find yourself with questions or in need of assistance, don't hesitate to reach out. You can contact me here on the forums or through my Discord (Tigergiri).

If theres a Trouble whitelisting you make a ./creq in game!  [ Ex : ./creq help im whitelisted but im still a wondering soul!] 

 

Feel free to browse the Wiki, and you can also join our  LOTC Discord  which is a wonderful place where you can ask questions to our various staff teams, meet other server players, and learn about new roleplay opportunities for all character races! The LotC Discord is a great help in getting you situated on our server.


 

As you embark on your journey in Aevos, simply type '/creq I need a monk' upon arrival, and the monks from Cloud Temple will be right there to guide you toward your chosen destiny.

And If you ever need me in game, my IGN is Capytiger! 

Happy roleplaying!

 

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