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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Instead of insant conclusions, phrasing should suggest 'attempts'.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Because it is something that the character would not know in roleplay-terms. This disturbs the flow of proper and genuine roleplay.
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Jorhor Elwyn
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Jorhor Elwyn stands at 6 feet tall, weighs 170 lbs, has ash-blond hair, gray-blue eyes, and wears a brown tunic with a leather belt, travel-worn cloak
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

Jorhor stepped into the dim tent, his hand resting on the dagger at his side. The candles flickered, casting shadows on his face that made him look older than he really was. He nodded at the hag, though his voice sounded a bit unsure.

 

"So, you knew I was coming?" he asked, glancing around the room cautiously.

 

He sat down slowly on the cushion she pointed to, not taking his hand off the dagger. His face looked tired as he started talking, his eyes lowering to the ground for a moment.

 

"I’ve come a long way," he said, his voice serious. "I grew up in a small village on the edge of the Velenic Plateau. Just farms, not much else. My parents were farmers—good people. They taught me how to survive. We didn’t have a lot, but we got by."

 

He paused, frowning, as if the memories were painful.

 

"Then the sickness came," he muttered, glancing at the hag again, as if hoping she'd understand.

 

His grip on the dagger tightened, his knuckles going pale.

 

"It took them first—my parents. I watched them waste away. People said it was a curse, something ancient and evil." Jorhor’s voice shook a bit, and he took a breath to steady himself.

Looking back at the hag, there was a hint of desperation in his eyes.

 

"I had to bury them, and the whole village after that. I’ve been chasing every rumor since. It led me here. If you know anything... I need to know."

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if you character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Please attempt to emote properly within the third person.

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see, you have been accepted onto the server! Well done on your application, you’re 

doing great! Welcome to the wonderful community of LotC!

To get started, The server IP is mc.lotc.co The server is 1.20.6

To get started, I suggest going to tutorial island or do; /creq Can a Wilven come assist me?

 

Here are some links to help you start out! x3

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Settlement_Guides

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

 If you need help, Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord smol_bean . I’m often online, so you can message me with /msg Smol_bean0  to find me in game. If I’m not around You can always do /creq with your questions or you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : Discord

Lastly, here is the new player hub, I recommend you look over it!

New player hub

Have fun role playing! :D

 

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