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    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It is when you use out of character knowledge or you use a messaging app or system to get help
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When your charcter forces an emote. For an example "Cam breaks Leo's sword"
    Status: Accepted

Character Name: Rose May Kemsing
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Human skin. Blue eyes. Orange and white dress. Orange hair.
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Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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Please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example that will complement the definition you have right now.

 

✦ Your biography feels somewhat lacking and not really as long as it should be for it to be somewhat acceptable. Try adding some storytelling to your biography of your character. Maybe write more about how it might be, a bit more about her background and history as a person.  Explain a bit about her future goal as a person etc.

 

✦ Consider changing your name to something more appropriate to the time and lore itself.

 

✦ Your skin doesn't seem appropriate with LoTC standards, perhaps you could look through our skin archive for temporarily skins before you're able to acquire a more personal skin. Change your interesting facts accordingly.

 

✦ Your interesting facts seems lackluster at best, it doesn't really offer us interesting facts about the character and what weaknesses it might have. Nor does it feel realistic that she'd much worse against someone using 'stone' than 'wood' in a roleplay setting. 

 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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 I appreciate you've made some of the changes, though there is still something you could and can improve. 

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✦ The city "Kal'ordhom" existed during Anthos and Vailor which was several hundred years back which does not fit with your character age. 

 

Your application was good but not good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Well done applicant!

I can only hope that you're able to have an amazing time on LoTC, being able to fully develop your own character with other people as time goes on.

The being said...

 

On the behalf of the Application team, I warmly welcome you to the Lord of The Craft community. I hope you the best of luck as you explore and roleplay on Atlas!

 

You’ll be whitelisted and implemented very shortly, you may also want to check out “ The New Player Discord ” for questions or dwell deeper into the wiki if times allow it.

While in

game you can also use /atreq [message] for any assistance you might need from an Application Member or directly message me in game - /msg MadYeAd. Not to mention that /help is a very helpful command that should be utilized.

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