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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you use other peoples knowledge to help get through the game.Or using other people.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is when you do something that realistically you can't do, for example flying.
    Status: Denied

My charter is a dark elf. It has skills which bode well for the future, some including his natural gift for martial arts. His appearance is acceptable but daunting and his most noticeable feature are his eyes, they can see the darkness in one's soul. He has a very threatening sense about him, his potential is unrecognizable. He acts with reason and fights in-foolishly. Surprisingly he has manners which are impeccable, these manners make him likable. Finally he likes to fight by himself but will if need be fight with someone. 


Character Name: Thioni
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: The pure aura of power hides behind the glazing eyes that would pierce the soul of any normal living being.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been placed on:

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-Your definitions could use a bit more work. Add a bit more detail, or an example of each.

-Please reference the canon LOTC lore at least once in your biography. You can find all needed lore here.

-What is this 'pure aura of power' that you mention in your interesting facts section? You may not apply with a magic, as you will need to do the appropriate roleplay in game to acquire a magic.

-Can his eyes literally see the darkness in one's soul, or is this just in a figurative sense? I recommend adding some more length to your biography and explaining these things a bit better.

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. If you need any help, don't hesitate to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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