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By DomD8

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When you use other peoples knowledge to help get through the game.Or using other people.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It is when you do something that realistically you can't do, for example flying.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Thioni
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: The pure aura of power hides behind the glazing eyes that would pierce the soul of any normal living being.
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Myleres

Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been placed on:

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-Your definitions could use a bit more work. Add a bit more detail, or an example of each.

-Please reference the canon LOTC lore at least once in your biography. You can find all needed lore here.

-What is this 'pure aura of power' that you mention in your interesting facts section? You may not apply with a magic, as you will need to do the appropriate roleplay in game to acquire a magic.

-Can his eyes literally see the darkness in one's soul, or is this just in a figurative sense? I recommend adding some more length to your biography and explaining these things a bit better.

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. If you need any help, don't hesitate to send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

When you are finished making the changes, please send me a message or comment on this app.

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Myleres

Your application has been:

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You failed to make the above changes in the time given. You may reapply in 3 hours. Please make sure you make the above changes for next time you apply.

If you need any assistance, feel free to message me or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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