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Radu333

By Radu333

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Radu#0849
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: My character likes keeping secret his resources,has great ideas and sometimes makes secret bases too.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I usually work with a teammate or 2 or 3 but sometimes I work alone.
    Status: Denied 
The adventure brought me here, sir. I'm sorry if you want to do business with me, but I can't. I'm in a hurry to talk to the mayor.
Can you take me to him please, it's urgent.
Character Name: Rony
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: I am an elf warrior from Rivendell. One of the last survived elves.All of my friends got killed by orcs when i was young,so I leaved the city.After
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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