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4K_Fall

By 4K_Fall

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: 4K_Fall#6232
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When you use information you received from out of character sources and then use it in future in roleplay.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When you make an emote of an action that your character is not able to do.
    Status: Denied

The boots of Fergus Van Vaarges would crankle on the path the dirt flying to the side on each step. He’d stop walking as he saw the walking man stopping infront of him, speaking to him. The soft and sweet wind would hit Fergus from the left, resulting in his hair and some part of the outfit flying to the right. “I came here to see the goods” The calm voice of Fergus escapes out of his mouth, eye contacting the man.

Character Name: Fergus Van Vaarges
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Fergus Van Vaarges has green eyes medium eyes and a medium nose, he has short black. He seemed to be wearing a green vest and olive pants.
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Carson

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.  https://app.grammarly.com/
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.

Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please send me a forum PM.

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Carson

Changed Status to Denied

 

 

Unfortunately, I've had to **deny** your application since it's been over 24 hours since the initial review. You may reapply any time.


Here's a link to your application again for easier access: 

And I would also highly suggest joining the LOTC official discord for easier access to help, for events, announcements, etc:
https://discord.com/invite/fwEQA2F

Also, if you want to find more information on the server lore, just check out the wiki on the link below!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Finally, feel free to familiarize yourself with the New Player Hub for when you are accepted! It includes commands, and other useful things for when you are accepted!
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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