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7Krieg

By 7Krieg

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: 7Krieg #3529
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: To adequate use of in real life knowledge in role playing games, in such that is not specificly known to in game character.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A negative act in which a player preforms non realistic actions that lessens RP realism. I.e taking on armies of orcs by oneself.
    Status: Denied

Born into the city of Vijorhelm.  Jack was the 2nd Son of a local farmer. At the age of 5, The Siege of Vijorhelm left Jack an orphan and forced to flee the city. Left alone, Jack was forced to survive over the next few days. Found on the ground, malnourished and dehydrated, a young, honorable knight named Sir Krieg found the starving Jack.The Knight offered the young boy food and water, it was then Sir Krieg took liking in Jack. Sir Krieg named Jack his squire, and over the next decade, the Jack (now a young man) preformed duties required by his master. Here he was taught to read by Sir Krieg and was given a loose education based on his experiences traveling with the Knight. One day, Sir Krieg was mortally injured in an training accident, and the honorable knight passed away a few days later. With his only connection and home lost, Jack was no longer a squire. In honor of his Sir Krieg, he took upon the Knight’s name as his own, and departed from the camp. The newly named Jack Krieg spent the next few years taking upon odd jobs to make a living and survive...

Character Name: Jack Krieg
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Dirty Grey Tunic, Worn Leather Pants. Red Haired with blue eyes. Medium height and relatively fit.
Roleplay Scenario:

After the long, grueling sea journey, Krieg took a deep breathe of fresh air before responding to the gentleman in front of him. “It’s a nice day, huh?” He paused a few moments before replying, “I’ve come here for work. Do you, kind sir, have any that may...” Krieg smirks and winks before finishing, “...require a sword?”

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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to it having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️
  • Your Character Biography includes references to wars that don’t exist. Please correct accordingly.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks say that your character is a trained swordsman. Unfortunately, he cannot be a trained swordsman before roleplaying it out after getting accepted into the server.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race – humans cannot have red eyes. Please correct this accordingly!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 


After correcting the above errors, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.

 

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