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    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information your character doesn't know to your advantage. For example: You are on discord with a friend from another group and he tells he's going to attack you, you tell this to your king/leader.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Telling your character is doing something that he cannot do. For example: *Connor pulls the man's intestines out with his hands.*
    Status: Denied

This is the story of Connor Wylde.

Connor Wylde was born in 1643 in a poor family who lives in Duchy of Ruska.
He only had 2 sisters so he and his dad had to work in the mines. 

 
One day the mine collapsed and Connor saw his father being crushed before his eyes. 
Connor was the only survivor but because he had seen those gruesome images he was traumatised and didn't want to talk for 2 years.
When he finally wanted to talk his voice sounded growling. 

 
The family had to sell their house because their father was no longer there to make money and Connor was scared to go in the mines again.
After living on the street for a year his youngest sister, Mary, got sick and died in her sleep.

 

A few days later a group of thief entered the city and started comming their way.
Connors mother said he had to look out and she took his bag.
She gave it to him and she said he had to run with his sister.
While he was running he lost his sister, but he had to keep running.

 
After a few hours of running Connor fell and he was found by an old lady.
She helped him to get better and gave him food and a place to spend the night.
The next morning he got some food and left, he went to the place where he left his mom and the only thing he found was a big blood stain.

 

3 years later...

 

Connor works in a bakery and gets enough money and has a small house. 
When Connor was working in the bakery a woman asked him if he recognized her. 
He looked at her and he saw that it was his sister.
She told him who killed their mother and he immediately took his bag and left.

 
His story will devellop from this point...


Character Name: Connor Wylde
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Connor has brown hair and blue eyes, he is 5'10" tall. He doesn't have a beard or moustache.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Hello there, your application is currently

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For the following reasons

~ you need to edit your definitions of metagaming and powergaming, please refer to the wiki for the correct definitions , i would also like to see an example of each. 

 

~ your backstory mentions being in the kingdom of Urguan , but your character choice is human , Urguan was a dwarven settlement , https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Grand_Kingdom_of_Urguan as seen in this link, please could you look through the lore of the humans and edit to suit this. 

 

~your Character description needs to include more details such as hieght , hair color. Basically describe how your character looks and what they are wearing and such.


 

If any of the reasons above involve the wiki here is the link wiki , this link will take you to the homepage.On here you will find all the server lore as well as the descriptions of powergaming and metagaming.

 

Your application being placed on pending means it was good, although there is still some issues, that need a little editing.From now you will have 24 hours to edit, once changes have been made please contact me either on the server via /msg Punisher8817 or on Discord Pun#6347. I will be happy to answer any questions you may have.

 

Also this is the link to our new player discord https://discord.gg/eySYjqw. Here you can ask questions, meet other players.

 

On the server you can also /atreq to place a ticket for assistance from either myself or a member of the application team.

 

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I updated it, but someone said it was coppied. This is not true and I worked on this for a whole day. It's to much research work for me to just get denied. If someone does this again i will be very mad.

 

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Hello there, your application has been

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Your application was denied for the following reasons

 

You have another pending application please make the edits to that requested by the other moderator 

 

You may apply again when you are ready, if you need help with this please feel free to contact myself or another member of the Application team. Or join our new player discord and ask for help there, this is the link https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

Also here is our wiki link, wiki homepage  , here you will find our lore as well as other useful information such as the meaning for metagaming and powergaming.

 

If you have any questions please feel free to msg me here on the forums , on discord Pun#6347 or in game with /msg Punisher8817.

 

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