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__Tato

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: ឵឵឵ ឵឵✟#3169
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Is a term used in rpg
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is thing that is impossible in real life but you do in the game
    Status: Denied

Get your ass out of here

Character Name: Tato Barbosa
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 0
Physical Description: Strong like Saitama
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions

 

Character Biography

 

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race.

 

Personality Traits/Quirks/Character Aspirations

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

 

Skin

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

 

Other

  • Your Character Name includes the last name of an already-existing notable family that is not open to new members. You may not start as a part of an existing family without the head’s permission! Please fix this. 

  • Your age is too young! The requirement is 18 years of age.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!



 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Lickspittle#3413]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Lickspittle to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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