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Catana

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Catana#5319
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using out of game info in-game to provide an unfair advantage, To gain info IRL that would be impossible to gain in game and act on it.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Playing god, deciding other characters actions for them, or giving yourself an unfair advantage by using emotes or ignoring them.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

*Smiles brightly*

- I’m here for the food of course! Maybe some curiosity items being sold here, Ohhh do they have cute things here ?

(pauses and looks around)

 – Hey um do u know any teachers? Magic teachers? I need to learn magic to  . . . well its better if you don’t know

Character Name: Catana(Nick: Katya)
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Lean/ stronger than she looks, 2 different eye colour, one is bright aqua-blue, silver/white hair, dark elf skin
Screenshot of Skin:
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Disheartened

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

  •  Your Character Biography needs some work. We can speak about it over discord to work it out.

  • Your Character Biography states that your character would like to go to Renelia. This city was recently dissolved, meaning you will no longer be able to live there. I’d simply alter this to say you were from there.

  • Please alter your Roleplay Scenario to fit the desired format with dialogue in quotes.

  • Your Physical Description and Skin describe your character as having two brightly coloured eyes, which is not consistent with your race. The lore describes eye colours as “subdued and pale”. See the lore below.

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @Alicia#9441 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Disheartened

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time because you did not make the changes in time. Here are the changes that would need to be made on your next application: 

 

  • Your Character Biography needs to be changed to remove the killing of your family as well as the twisted part that occurred after, and the other pieces we discussed on discord. I can go more in depth there when you do your re-application if you need help.

  • Your Character Biography states that your character would like to go to Renelia. This city was recently dissolved, meaning you will no longer be able to live there. I’d simply alter this to say you were from there.

  • Please alter your Roleplay Scenario to fit the desired format with dialogue in quotes.

  • Your Physical Description and Skin describe your character as having two brightly coloured eyes, which is not consistent with your race. The lore describes eye colours as “subdued and pale”. See the lore below.


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Alicia#9441, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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