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_ItsRory_

By _ItsRory_

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Rory#7459
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Its a preaty fun thing and i think it is awesome
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Bether than metagaming.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Character Name: Soul Stealer
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: A slime with an eigtpack that is a young king who love building.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

→ Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

→ Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!

 

→ Your Physical Description states that you are a slime. You can not be a slime.

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks states that you steal the souls of those who attack you. You’re crazy.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord cobbler#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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