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_Luckycharm_

_Luckycharm_

By _Luckycharm_

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: _Luckycharm_#9288
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: best way to get good
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: when you make your self powerfull I dont really know on that one
    Status: Denied

He was born in a mine he lived in mine he worked in a mine. A mine that no longer exists it was destroyed with his parents in it they were to slow to get out and he watched as there bones were crushed infront  of him scared him for life but every character starts somewhere and the rest is still unwritten 

Character Name: Lucky
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: silver hair and silver eyes and tan skin
Roleplay Scenario:

I search for new beginning a fresh start I wish to get loyal companions and form a team. I hope to guide them to a strong wise kind life.

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__Soph

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

  • Your Physical Description must match your skin.

 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

  • Your Character’s Biggest Fear is a bit lacking. Must include explanation.

 

  • What your character likes most about themselves is a bit lacking. Must include explanation. 

 

  • What your character dislikes about themselves are a bit lacking. Must include explanation. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.    

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario must be in third person. 

 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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