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-Please make sure that your character’s biography flows akin to an actual story, currently you include too many ‘.’ – maybe try adding commas or other structural ways to word your biography. 

-Include more depth, more detail about how your character grew up, how he spent his past time etc. Remember the purpose of a biography is to give us an idea of how your character lived and what they strive to accomplish. 

-Include at least two pieces of server lore within your biography, this could be where your character lived in Arcas, or what religion they take part in etc. You can find everything you need to know about our server here

-Please also assure you word your metagaming and powergaming definitions more suitably, as they currently stand they are too short.

-Also assure that you include at least one weakness within your interesting facts that physically hinder your character!

You have 24 hours to make the following changes, before your application will be automatically denied. If you feel you need more time to make these changes please do let me know and I will see about offering an extension period. 

Please do contact me once these changes have been made, either upon the server (/msg TheIchorDruid), the forums or my discord Rae#3015.

We also encourage new players to join the new player discord where you can chat with other new players, veterans of the community and fellow Community staff members, simply click here

The given 24 hours have exceeded, feel free to reapply with the changes given above.

If you need any further assistance or guidance please do contact me upon the information provided above.