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_Nyglion_

_Nyglion_

By _Nyglion_

    • Rules: No
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: meatgaming means outside and in side your character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is basically what words you don't want to hear in a video game
    Status: Denied

someone finds my character and begs him to help in a battle but I refuse and tell him to leave me alone after he doesn't leave me alone we fight and I win and leaves him to rest and heal but after he is fully healed he ask's to train him but I refuse and he keeps asking I keep refusing 

Character Name: Nyglion
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: I wold like my character to look like my minecraft skin also my hight is 6 foot and weight 60kg and I am pretty strong
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. 

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

You also stated that you do not accept our servers' rules, if that was a mistake please be sure to click on ‘Yes’ next time.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

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