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Hotaru

By Hotaru

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: Mnuj#3711
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Meta-gaming is when a persona uses knowledge that was learned ooc. One example of this might be if a persona knows another persona's secret IRP, that they learned through Discord chats.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When a character makes ungodly or unfair actions, not giving the other player(s) a chance to react back. For example, I emote 'Billy Bob uses his sword to cut your head off'. This emote does not give you a chance to dodge or react or whatnot, which isn't
    Status: Denied

Mesperyian looks the man, he squints slightly confused before blurting out “What do you want!” Catching his mistake, he quickly shakes his head, offering a small apology before continuing on ”Im sorry, I am not used to general conversation. My name is Mesperyian and I am looking for it all!” He says with the smallest of grins on his newly shaved face.

Character Name: Mesperyian
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Mesperyian stands at an average 5'10' and sports short, shaggy, light brown hair that makes a contrast over his pale skin.
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SoulReapingWolf

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

 

  • Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are alright, however, I suggest using examples to show understanding of the concepts. The following link can help you out.
  • Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed? (you can’t have a metallic arm.)
  • Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
    • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
    • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
    • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached your time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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