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Alhareth
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: alhareth#3684
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: to cheat or use tactics not meant to be used in a game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: to do something and need someone else to play along with you
    Status: Denied

alhareth or as people would call him abo was a really unique as a child, he always begged his father to train him, and was interested in the topic of war, he always read books about war and was blessed with a strategic mind. growing up he always felt out of place like he was not meant to be here. alhareth always wanted to fight to battle, but sadly he was too young to go battle in wars yet.

after he reached the age of 18 he enrolled in the army with his father, working under his father alhareth or abo learned a lot about wars and how to flank enemies.
when he reached he age of 21 years old he was promoted to war general, he experienced the first lost war. it wasnt a regular war, it was a bloodbath.
the enemies have flanked them from both sides and there was nothing they could do. they were mascaraed bodies left and right, everywhere.
and then it struck him his one and only objective was to protect his father, he looked right and left he found nothing he started running looking for his father and when he did it was too late.
one of the enemies got to him first, seeing his father stabbed in the stomach. rage filled alhareth, as his only focus was to kill that man.
he swiftly cut through every person standing in his way and went right infront of the man, and cut his throat without saying a word.
after that a sandstorm appeared blurring alhareth's vision. and thats where he blacked out and woke up covered in sand in the lands of (the sever).


Character Name: Alhareth/abo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: wears old arabic clothes, he has green eyes black hair colour, hes 5,8 , he weighs 80 kilos
Roleplay Scenario:

hah, im actually lost sir

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

→On your confusing rule.  You would be correct, no underground potato farms, sadly.

→ As a side note, I would not put that slash in your name.  Your character’s nickname or whatever other names that is can be kept up with by yourself because not everyone would know that.

Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

Your Character Biography states that your character cut through a whole swarm of enemies to slay a man.  This sounds like powergaming and is against our server rules! I would advise going back through the community guidelines and looking back over what powergaming is. Please review them once more and make sure you fully understand them!

 

Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 

 

Your Character Fear must exist, and be related to your character’s biography.



After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord SuperGuy#7443. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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