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By AceIsOnCrack

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: cozyace_
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I just try to ignore and to express my non desire to be involved.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It can lead to disruption and non belief.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))
 

I look around, trying to gather my words.. "if you want me to be very honest.. I'm not sure. I was wondering if you could help me with that.." She says trying to recollect any of her old memories...

Character Name: Ace
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Black hair, 120 pounds, height 5'9, eye color blue, skin color light brown, a nice black sweater and white shirt.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below:

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.
 

Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario and backstory! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
 

Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it
 

Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 
 

Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!  
 

Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!
 

When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
 

Your skin isn’t server lore appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive? 



If you would like assistance in creating a human character, please take a look at this wiki page for humans on LOTC!
Humans - Lord of the Craft
 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is wavelincoln! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @WaveLincoln. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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