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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: knowing an information out of character and use it in role-play .
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing an action that your character isn't capable of .
    Status: Denied

Zylan Amadeus steps out of the boat and replied <I want to find the  love of my life and build my own family >

the well dressed gentleman would look at the young girl as if she said an odd thing and would reply <good luck with, that anything else to for you ? >

Zylan Amadeus would reply <can you show me where is the tavern > 

the well dressed gentleman points the big blue building and would say <there ... > before he walked off . 

Zylan Amadeus would walk towards the big blue building the man pointed at . 

 

Character Name: Zylan Amadeus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Zylan Amadeus have black long hair and is 5,7 foot tall . She wears a long pink dress who has a old doll on her pocket .
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sarahbarah

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!


 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

  • Your Character Biography contains a common character trope (dad killed by a bandit), so please be sure to edit this!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear.

 

A small side-note: You do not have to worry about changing this if you do not want to, but it's important to know so that you can properly grasp the lore! Since your character is 24, they would have been born on Almaris, rather than travelling to it. Curon is an old nation that they would not have been alive to live on.

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message teawithsarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at teawithsarah#0007

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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