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Adam_Pinetree
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You avoid powergaming by emoting attempts instead of guaranteed actions, never controlling another player’s character, and keeping your own character’s abilities realistic for who they are. This ensures everyone has a fair chance to react and keeps the roleplay believable.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is when a player forces actions onto another character without giving them the chance to respond or resist, or when a character performs actions that are unrealistic, unfair, or impossible within the game’s mechanics or lore. It removes agency from other players and breaks immersion by treating roleplay like something you can “win,” rather than something collaborative.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Adam Pinetree
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: Brown haired man with a spark in his eyes. His posture shows confidence . He wears a white shirt and rough brown pants made from leather
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

 

Adam Pinetree lowers himself onto the wooden bench, his movements deliberate and quiet, as though habit has taught him not to draw attention unless he intends to. His hands rest on his knees, calloused from years of hauling nets and rowing against a river’s current.

“Adam Pinetree,” he says evenly. “Son of Rowan Pinetree, woodcutter by trade. He spent his life trimming timber, but his nights were for telling stories.”

Adam’s gaze drifts, softened by memory. “He’d speak of the river spirits, the old shapes beneath the water… but he also told tales of something greater—the Big Sea. A place so wide you can’t see the other side. A place where the creatures are older than memory and larger than anything the river could ever hide.”

He shifts his weight slightly, boots scraping the floor. “Folk around home treated those stories like entertainment, nothing more than campfire talk. But Father believed them. And I did too.”

A faint tension settles in Adam’s shoulders. “I took to the river early, hoping to glimpse something real—some sign the old tales weren’t just stories. But lately the river’s been… different. Tracks in the mud that don’t match anything living nearby. Wakes without boats. Something big moving under the surface long after the moon’s risen.”

His brows draw together, troubled yet resolute. “Those signs made one thing clear: if the river still holds remnants of the old creatures, then the sea—where the stories say they first came from—must hold even more.”

He lifts his chin slightly, his expression firm. “So I left home. Followed the disturbances downstream, each one leading me farther from the forests I knew. I want to reach the coast. I want to see the Big Sea for myself. And when I get there…” He pauses, a spark of determination in his eyes. “I mean to sail out and find what really lurks beneath its waters.”

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Powergaming
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    • Please be sure to write in the third person, using your character's pronouns rather than 'I'
    • Please add more details to your characters actions
    • Please better explain why your character has left their home

 



 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajessto let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

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My discord is @tarajessif you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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