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Ahareks

By Ahareks

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Gol D Roger#1458
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: i do not know what this mean
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: pretty good
    Status: Denied

going from city to city , robbing people between them , and figting for good people , as mercenery

Character Name: Gol D Roger
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: not stable , very fast getting angry
Screenshot of Skin:
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is incorrect.

  • Please state whether you have roleplayed before or not!

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your wanted achievements must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your fears must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit lacking. You must include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes, and at least one action. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Rin is Alive#0001 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message RinIsSalty to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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