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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using things you learned in real life as character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: abusing power or preforming things like unrealistic actions or forcing things on people
    Status: Denied

My charecter steps of the boat, standing straight up, and having a look on his face that says do not mess with me. He says "I do not come for adventure or wealth. And I have no where to rise in this era of filthy politicians and greedy human. I come to this city to complete a mission. And when I have someones name on my list, I always cross it off."

Character Name: Rhys Qitris
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: a dirty blond haired male 6'5 at just 130 pounds with ears a little short for most elves. Two blue eyes the color of the oceon. A brown cloak.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Wood elves are usually capped at 6'2 and do not have blonde hair unless they are of mixed descent. Please amend this accordingly! I recommend looking to this wiki page on wood elves for future reference. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! (I recommend adding elf ears to the side of the head)

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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