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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When a user controlling a character has knowledge the role play character should not know, therefore using that knowledge is metagaming.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When your character forces actions on another character , typically without their consent
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Ser Essenza
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 56
Physical Description: 6'1 170 lbs, lean muscular build with Silver eyes and pale blonde hair. Scars across his face from growing up on the streets.
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Lirinya

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  • You need to include at least two pieces of lore into your biography, and try to make the biography at least 7 sentences long. At fifty two, your character has a lot of leeway. There are a lot of places he could have visited, and things that have been seen.
  • Your powergaming definition is inaccurate/not what we’re looking for. I suggest looking up power-emoting.
  • Your metagaming definition also needs to be elaborated.
  • Your interesting facts should be traits. Things like social anxiety, or a stammer, and make sure you have a strong positive, neutral and a negative.
    • You don’t absorb power from a twin that was never born...You could say that he was supposed to be a twin but one died, but not only does he gain nothing from it, it wouldn’t be a character trait. You could work it into the bio, if you really wanted to.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

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