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Akiyo
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Akiyo#1013
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: if a player suddenly knows more then it would be possible for the caracter.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: if a player get unrealistic and overpowerd, so when its un realistic.
    Status: Denied

Asulyna was born in a small woodland village with a sister Alae who was born 4 years ago. When she grew older she and Alae where always together collecting food, cooking or cleaning.

When Asulyna grew older, around the age of 8, she was able to cook, collect food bye herself and clean.

When Asulyna was around 13 years old she started learning to hunt for food and look out for possible threats around the village, she practiced everyday for 2 years until she was the best of her group.

Asulyna joined the main hunt team and 1 year later she joined the scout team to protect the village. Asulyna can work with every weapon from long range bows to close range swords.

 

When Asulyna was 17 Alae was 21 and left the village to go out on her own and explore the world, Asulyna tryed to go with Alae but she refused, she wanted to go on her own and so she did.

Asulyna kept training to leave the village as well and go after Alae, when she was 21 she also left the village and went for her adventure to find her sister.

Asulyna left 5 years ago and wasn’t able to find her sister.

 

Asulyna get money from the bows she kames and sells, she enjoys doing that so its a win – win

On the way Asulyna learned some new skills: shooting crossbow, hiding in and around trees and sneaking up or around people.

Asulyna is very social and likes making new friends, she travels a lot still trying to find her sister.

Asulyna keeps going and never settles somewhere for more then 2 weeks, only if necessary.


Character Name: Asulyna Kirituna
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Middle length brownish hair and forest green eyes, she has a slim body, is 5'3 and 130 lbs, she mostly wears a green suite where its easy to move in.
Roleplay Scenario:

*Asulyna turns around and inspct the gentelmans clothing, while eating a apple she bought earlyer*

 

“Oh hello, im just here to look around for food and maby some new tools” 

 

*she takes an other bite* “can i help you with anithing?"

 

*not even waiting for a respond she says*

“my name is Asulyna, what is yours? I would like to talk longer but i need some more supplies before im going”

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography states that she has a sister that was born 4 years before her, this is impossible due to the cure all elves carry
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves#Curses
  • Your Character Biography states that after a few years of training she became the best at a lot of things, this falls under common charter troops please take a look at this link to read more!
  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! Here are some links to help you ❤️
  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/149754-wood-elven-appearance-guide/
  2. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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