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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Giving ICly information OOCly.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing things that you aren't capable of in real life.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Nessa Guerrero
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: {Nessa Guerrero} She'd be Standing at 5'5, and weighing 103lbs. She'd also have a right nose piercing
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Hi, as you can see your application has been denied, check below for the detailed reasons.

 

Your biography has parts in it that are not lore approved, nor do they exist in the LOTC cannon. The biography also needs to be longer and involve a lore reference.

Your metagaming and powergaming need to be longer, I recommend providing an example.

One of three interesting character facts needs to be a weakness of some sort.

Your skin isn't lore appropriate at all, it needs to fit the medieval time period.

The heterochromia is not going to slide either, its overly clique

 

Dont worry though! You can try again right after and make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Zach#5794]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message ZachsSlayer to find me in game. If i’m not around you can also use the new player discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You can also use /atreq ingame and me or my fellow AT members can help you that way!

Also, i recommend you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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