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Albxsti

By Albxsti

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Albasti#1438
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is using information from an outside source that your character would not have otherwise known
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is forcing your actions onto someone during an rp scenario, without giving them time to respond
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Albasti: "Hello there,my friend.

I seek fame and fortune, wealth and conquest, in this great land of yours. My people speak highly of this land as a firm place to entrench one's mind in the grand pursuit of future goals.
I am here to create a divine state, that will soon rule over these lands, and shall be the hope of every human man, woman and child."

 

Albasti moves towards the gentlemen, to the point where their noses are close to touching:

 

"And you, my friend, are witnessing the leader of a state so great, that your very eyeballs will be worth a fortune, a century from now."

 

Albasti steps back, adjusting his hair

He then turns swiftly on his heels, and walks in the direction of a stall that interests him, whilst fingering his pockets for spare gold coins

 

Upon reaching a stall that sells weaponry, he slams his hands upon the counter, causing the stall attendant to jump.

 

"Can you help me? I Need a weapon, some armour, and a fellow countryman who knows the land, to help me reach my destination.
I am willing to pay good money for anyone that can supply me with equipment of the highest quality"- he began

 

Startled, the stall owner whispers to his colleague in a strange, foreign language, and then turns to Albasti with a wide smile.

 

"Of course I can help you." -the stall owner replied

 

 

 

 


                

Character Name: Albasti
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 6 feet tall, athletically built with brown eyes and black hair. A weight of 80kg. Often wears quite dark clothing
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Your character biography states that his parents where killed by bandits. This is a common trope, we try to avoid. Here's a link to typical character tropes: < Here >

- Your character's biography is a little short, please make sure it has at least 6 sentences!

- Your roleplay definition was a little lacking, please add some more information and add whether you have roleplayed before or not!

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Laeonathan#3614!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • - Your character biography states that his parents where killed by a freak accident. This is a common trope we try to avoid. Here's a link to typical character tropes: < Here >

    - Your roleplay definition was a little lacking, please add some more information and add whether you have roleplayed before or not!

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!


My discord is Laeonathan#3614! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

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