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Alfredo300

By Alfredo300

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: Atlasbard#5601
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the act of your character having knowledge that the player may know, but the character shouldn't know.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: The act of being overpowered and untouchable
    Status: Denied

"You’ve just stepped off of the boat in the port of a massive and fortified city. Before you lies a sprawling bazaar, with numerous shops, stalls, and seated traders selling wares to folk of all walks of life. Just as you’re about to continue walking onwards, into the market, you’re approached by a well-dressed gentleman who looks upon you with a big smile. “Welcome!” He began. “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?”
How do you respond?"

 "I wish to etch my name into the history of the world. Nice to meet you" Alistor responds as he holds out his hand "Im Alistor Brightwood"

Character Name: Alistor Brightwood
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Green eyes, Black Hair, freckles, Average height.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message __Gavyn. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at gavyn#4574

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here 

: https://discord.gg/lotc

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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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