Alzzz11

You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

• Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

• Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support. You cannot be perfect in a skill, and you must correct all grammar, spelling, and punctuation. 

• Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.

• Your physical description needs a rewrite.

• Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. Liking or hating something is not a trait, it is a preference. Preferences change easily, but traits are something that takes effort to change. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits

• I see that your skin is not up to par with the server, but fret not; LoTC has a Skin Archive for players who cannot make their own skins, or need a temporary skin until they can make their own. These skins are Free to Use. Your eyes are too bright, and your clothing color needs to be toned down.

When you have made the changes, feel free to leave a comment on this page, or contact me through discord at Language#1688. If you require further assistance, contact me or any community staff member found in our New Player Discord

There were multiple reasons why your application was denied:

• Your definition for Metagaming and Powergaming is incorrect. Please review the page on Metagaming and Powergaming

• Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support. You cannot be perfect in a skill, and you must correct all grammar, spelling, and punctuation. 

• Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.

• Your physical description needs a rewrite.

• Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. Liking or hating something is not a trait, it is a preference. Preferences change easily, but traits are something that takes effort to change. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits

• I see that your skin is not up to par with the server, but fret not; LoTC has a Skin Archive for players who cannot make their own skins, or need a temporary skin until they can make their own. These skins are Free to Use. Your eyes are too bright, and your clothing color needs to be toned down.

You may reapply at any time, but please take the time to read.