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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: iamnotaboyoragirliamagender
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By playing fair and square.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: because they can say things that other shouldn't know yet, and change their actions
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
"Oh!", I sit in the chair, cross my legs and look at her, "So you were expecting my coming? That's... Great" I pause as a smile get on my face "After all those years of hearing others pasts, now its finally my time to tell" I sight as my smile fade away "It all started some time ago, in my hometown, my family, when I was young let me choose an weapon of my desire and a science method for me to dominate after my weapon mastery" was what I said, after I stopped, I took a dagger while spinning it on my finger. "I took a dagger, as you can see, and talking about it, did you know that this one is made with the finest metal, found close to the planet's core, and melted in the hottest temperature usable, to then be immersed in a freezing lake, and then they build there its shape, and that's only for the blade, the handle itself is made of the finest branch of the rarest tree on the world, its designed by one of the best designers, and shaped by a fine woodworker, and..." I realize that my rambling about the knife was getting out of control, so I stop speaking for a while, leaving the atmosphere a little award, then I break the silence, speaking: "My sincere apologies, I, just got excited about my blade, that is a common thing to do back in my home. But, back to what I was saying, I picked a studied, that deals with people's costumes and culture, so after mastering my blade mastery, I left to study the art of culture around the world. And that's my story, nothing to get excited around." as I finished those words I looked at the old lady, and asked: "What about you? I spoke mine, so its your time to tell you your story, and that of the people surround you"


Character Name: Av'ac
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 48
Physical Description: 5'9 ft;
long white hair braided with an amethyst at the end;
purple amethyst like eyes;
purple arm-less shirt with a darker pant outlined w/ gold.
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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

 

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 


 

✿ Your Skin's Outfit doesn't fit lotc standards.  If you need help picking a skin  you can find skins here. There is also the LOTC discord where you can request a skin. There is also Planet minecraft’s FTU outfits, from the community! Ftu | Minecraft Skins sorted by Relevancy | Planet Minecraft Community  Feel free to also look at our skin archive! https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

✿ Since the skin is only a minor problem, you are welcome to provide me a reference of what you would like your character to wear, and I will create a new file for you based on that!



 

You only have 24 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tigergiri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here! 

If you need to contact me or need help, you can always join the LotC Discord here

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

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✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

 

✿ Your Skin's Outfit doesn't fit lotc standards.  If you need help picking a skin  you can find skins here. There is also the LOTC discord where you can request a skin. There is also Planet minecraft’s FTU outfits, from the community! Ftu | Minecraft Skins sorted by Relevancy | Planet Minecraft Community  Feel free to also look at our skin archive! https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

✿✿ Since the skin is only a minor problem, you are welcome to provide me a reference of what you would like your character to wear, and I will create a new file for you based on that!

 

You are also encouraged to join our  LOTC Discord , a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community. If you need any additional help please look at our New player guide 

You may reapply at anytime however please make the above changes before you do so. 

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