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By arescartier

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Ares Cartier#6763
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when said character has no relevant knowledge or awareness under the circumstances.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is the carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions.
    Status: Denied

A nervous smile reached Bludhall’s lips, “I have come here in search of some a fighter or soldier ,I am in seek of a good mercenary or personal guard.

 

”Soldier? Are you an train soldier or do you have any experience with a sword?”

 

Bludhall’s half-way smile never faltered, “Yes, I am a soldier! I server my small town in Oren. I took after my grandfather when I was 15.” He looks around the man, trying to see the boats ahead.

 

As Bludhall was about to excuse himself the man interjected and pulled him alongside him. Quickly he pulled back from him giving him a aggravated stare.

 

“If you could please excuse me, I need to go search for someone that actually needs me. Not go off somewhere with a random man!” Bludhall storms off from the quiet man with a brisk speed.

 

Character Name: Bludhall
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: He is 6'5 , blonde hair, he is lean full of muscle and has blue eyes. He weighs around 180.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Power-gaming 
  • Physical Description
  • Personality/Quirks
    • I don’t really see negative and positive traits, just a general idea that he enjoys fighting, please expand and make it more intresting
  • Bio
    • I don’t really see two different lore references other then a nation name and a town name, so please go back and read some history on different human settlements and proof read your bio as you did refer to your character as a she.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @Cad518#8811, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/

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