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    Discord: Arkamas#9
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by not modding the game in any way that creates an unfair advantage towards other players
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: metagaming disrupts the integrity of fair roleplay by allowing players to undermine their characters' development, gain unfair advantages, and spoil the world for others.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Olimark
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: brown hair, white, blue and grey armor
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—” Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

You take a cautious step into the tent, feeling the cool dampness of the air press against your skin. The flickering candlelight casts long shadows that dance across the crooked walls. You settle onto the cushion, feeling its dampness seep through your worn cloak. The old hag’s eyes narrow as she studies you, and you swallow hard, suddenly aware of the weight of her gaze.*

You: "I… I did not expect to be *here*." *Your voice is steady, but the uncertainty lingers.* "This town, this place—it feels… wrong. I have come seeking answers, though I'm unsure what question I need answered. There are too many. You see, I was born into odds most would deem impossible. A child of death, yet I live, and I wonder—why? Was it fate or a curse? The weight of survival has never felt like a blessing. But perhaps you know something of this. Perhaps you see what lies beyond this swamp, beyond the shadow of my doubts. I need to understand, old crone, why I am here and what I must do." 

*You pause, overseeing the hag, waiting for her to speak. The candle flames flicker in the still air as the world outside seems to fade into nothingness.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person.

→ Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @blake0205 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is blake0205 If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @blake0205

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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