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Thea
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the act of using external/IRL or OOC communication to benefit one's roleplay character. Example; a person has a private conversation with another person out of game. The contents of that conversation gave one of those RP'ers an advantage tha
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Roleplaying in such a way that one removes autonomy from other players. I.E.- telling other players how their character is affected.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Thea
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 60
Physical Description: Thea is of normal height for a wood elf, standing at 4.5' tall. Hair is black. Skin is dark tan. Eyes are hazel (red, green, blue). Body is muscular.
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Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been placed on:

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-Your character is extremely short for their race! 4'5" is a rather unusual height for a wood elf. They would normally be taller unless affected by a genetic defect. I'd recommend changing your height to something more common for wood elves, which is somewhere within the 5-6 foot range.

-I'd recommend making another reference to the lore in your biography, as Laurelin has not been around for hundreds of years.

 

You have 24 hours to make the above changes.

If you need any help in doing so, feel free to either send me a message or join the new player discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

When done making the changes, please either send me a message or comment on this application.

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Your application has been:

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I consulted a lore moderator and it turns out your height actually is fine, so I apologize for that discrepancy. However, you still should make another reference to the lore with a more up-to-date city or event, as Laurelin has not been around for hundreds of years.

I recommend joining the new player discord if you need any assistance.  https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You may reapply in three hours.

 

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