ArtemisFowl3rd

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
   
• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!   https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races     https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
   
• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are?
   
• Your Physical Description lacks in detail, so please add some more; things like hair color, eye color, height, hair length, etc.
   
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
   
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are also a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
   
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
   
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @BreadStick#5363 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

• https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
   

• https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to not completing revisions within the 24 hour time period, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
   
• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!   https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races     https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters
   
• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are?
   
• Your Physical Description lacks in detail, so please add some more; things like hair color, eye color, height, hair length, etc.
   
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
   
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are also a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
   
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
   
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. https://app.grammarly.com/

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @BreadStick#5363, and I recommend you join the Lord of The Craft Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F