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AsianNani

By AsianNani

    • Rules: No
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: aidan-san#4351
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The use of irl knowledge to determine your own character's actions
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Doing things in a game to make progress towards a goal
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

N: "Don't worry about it."

M: Okay! Would you like to buy something?

N: No. I'll be leaving now.

M: C'mon! Just one thing!

N: Fine if it'll get you to leave me alone.

M: How about this sword! It's a fine sword made by the elves.

N: I'll take it. 

M: Great! 500 coins.

N: Here. 

M: It's been a plesure!

 

Character Name: Nani
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Short black hair, black eyes, pale skin, wears a suit, pretty short, somewhat muscular, 120 lbs
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and be sure to include an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography states that your character is living in Aegis. Aegis is an old continent that your character would not have lived on since they are only twenty-two! Please amend this accordingly.

  • Your Character Biography states that your character was hunted down by the Black Scourge. Your character would not have been alive during their existence, so I would recommend editing this as well.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some updated lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. Please keep in mind that this should be at least two sentences long, too!

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. Please keep in mind that this should be at least two sentences long, too!

  • Having a fear of death is common among most people, so I would recommend elaborating on a fear that relates to your character's backstory and is specific to your character in particular!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include at least one piece of action. 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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