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AstrixMacca
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: AstrixMacca#2783
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: dont listen
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it can stuff up other peoples experiences
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


I'm new around here... I've been away for many years. I was born into a family of dark elves. I was trained to fight, kill, hunt. I'm an efficient assassin and a good listener. I will defend my honour with my life.


Character Name: Astrix
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: buff as hell...
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!
 


Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

Metagaming & Powergaming - Lord of the Craft

Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action.
 

Your Skin does not match your character’s race nor is it up to LotC standards! Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

Skin Archive - Lord of the Craft

Races - Lord of the Craft

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!


 

Have you finished editing your application or you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AllegoryRose

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ Neviah#1516
 

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the Wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message AllegoryRose

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ Neviah#1516

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the Wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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