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Atayin
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Atayin#7455
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: when you use infromation from real world or in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing unrealistic action in game that you cant do in real world
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.


Character Name: Atayin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Brown Eyes, Black hair, mesomorph body, 1.73m, 51kg, North indian looking
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- You have to write and submit a Biography for your Persona

 

- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 


- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

- Your personality Traits/Quirks states that they believe in indian religion, however Indian is not a thing in Lord of the Craft and against the lore

 

- Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the 

 

- Your Character Fear is against the server rules please review them again https://www.lordofthecraft.net/rules/

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

- Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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