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AtlanticEX

By AtlanticEX

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: AtlanticEXe#1873
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is the use of info outside of roleplay. For example, using Discord to communicate information that the in game character otherwise would not have known.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when someone uses unrealistically overpowered actions, or when they force emotes on other characters. Lore breaking powers are included.
    For example, a non magic user somehow knowing magic more than mages.
    Status: Denied

edit: somehow, my old story seems to not have saved. I have rewritten it here. Exordin walked into the city. A smiling, well-dressed man had asked him about his ambitions. Exordin immediately attempted to gauge his intentions. He didn't know anyone in the city, so why would someone ask?

 

His response, carefully edited to omit anything that could be used against him. "I am currently visiting this city, both for business and for vacation. Wealth and elevation would not be unwelcome, but I don't really care." The well dressed man, still smiling, asked, "Would you be welcome to an adventure, which you did not mention?" Exordin didn't trust this man in particular. "Yes, I would. I would also appreciate you not twisting my words, thank you. I wish you a good day." With that, Exordin turned his back from the man and headed into the city.

Character Name: Exordin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Black of hair and eyes, slightly lean and taller than normal. Prefers darker clothing.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography states he comes from a land that doesn't synchronize with his age, please change this to make sure he comes from the correct time. I.E: Almaris.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your skin cannot include excessive noise shading, please change this.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI




Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

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