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AtlastheBunny

By AtlastheBunny

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Psychopomp#4763
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Looking from the outside perspective, not that of the character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making your character as flawless/powerful as possible
    Status: Denied

"Ah... nothing of the sort I'm afraid. Here for work."

Brushes past the man. Moving quickly makes his way to a market and tries to find a bakery.

 

Character Name: Atlas Hudd
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 195cm, 65kg, Lean muscle, Brown hair, brown eyes, sharp jaw line.
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

o    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

→ Your Character Biography is too short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

o    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

o    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

o    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit lacking. Try to be more descriptive in your emote and make it a bit longer!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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