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AlexWyattJr

By AlexWyattJr

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other website
    Discord: minecraftplayer101dangg
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: No
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Idk
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

Character Name: Atomic
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Curcly hair blue eyes
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming & Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  1. LoTC Wiki Page
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here! This will also explain what Metagaming & Powergaming is!
  1. LoTC Youtube page, Combat Roleplay video
  • Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it.
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!example “Hello my name is -”
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory & roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!example They moved to lift the cloth door to walk into the tent
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  1. example He sat down, She looked around the room, they looked at the old hag and smiled
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming & Powergaming. Including an example if you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out.
  • LoTC Wiki Page
  • You can also learn more about combat roleplay here! This will also explain what Metagaming & Powergaming is!
  • LoTC Youtube page, Combat Roleplay video
  • Hello there! It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.
  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it.
  • Please make sure to mark out what your character is saying with quotation marks, or make sure to make out your actions however you see fit!example “Hello my name is -”
  • Please make sure to use actions in your backstory & roleplay scenario. This is just to ensure we know what you are doing!example They moved to lift the cloth door to walk into the tent
  • When talking about your character’s actions! Remember to use 3rd person!
  • example He sat down, She looked around the room, they looked at the old hag and smiled
  • Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good.
  • Your skin isn’t server appropriate. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?
  • https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 


 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Tigergiri), my forum account, or on the server (Tigergiri). 

You are also encouraged to join our  LOTC Discord , a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community. If you need any additional help please look at our New player guide 

You may reapply at anytime however please make the above changes before you do so. 

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