august_math_spil

-Your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions are entirely incorrect. Take a look at the links for meta-gaming and power-gaming at the top of the 'add new application' page as to orient yourself with the defintions of such.

-In the application, it asks you write a biography for your character. This is a definition of biography taken from google.

We ask that you take a moment to make a character, and make a story for them, integrating server 'lore' or information tieing them to this world, such as where he was born, or what important events happened during his life. Simply saying 'funny charismatic athletic good guy' and than an anime picture for your character's biography is far too lacking.

-Please take some time to proofread your application, as this one is strewn with typos and errors, and shows extremely little effort.

-Why is your character called "The Blade"? Surely that is not his full name his parents gave him? Can you imagine: "Hello, my first name is 'The' and my last name is 'Blade', but you can call me 'The Blade.'"

-You repeat charismatic  and athletic 3 separate times through your character's biography, description, and interesting facts. Though some overlap between the 3 is expected, simply repeating such 3 times for all 3 questions is extremely lazy.

-You may re-apply in 6 hours.

-Feel free to send me a private message on the forums if you have any questions.