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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.biz
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: unrealistic actions and is un fare to people
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: use of info got out of character
    Status: Denied

he is now a teen, and he has a plan to live a good live

Character Name: leo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: a human teen with green eyes
Roleplay Scenario:

The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

hesitates at the doorway choosing his words carefully " how did you know if I was going to be here? " He asks as he sits after they a bit he tells her that he will make something of himself earn enough to live right, help people, and even fix places like this

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Hiccup392

Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo



 

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! 
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it. This means their origin and history, before they became a playable character. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.

 

  • Your Physical Description could use a bit more detail! If you’re unsure what to add, consider including details like height, eye color, hair color and length, clothing style, and other distinctive features. These are all great starting points!




 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @.hiccup to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

You can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the New Player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hiccup392

 

Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. Your response is not quite right. Ensure to include an example in your response. If you're having a hard time writing something down/or don’t know how else to word it, contact a community member. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

    You can also learn more about combat roleplay here

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo



     

  • Please make sure to include at least six sentences in your roleplay scenario! 
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your character doesn’t talk about it. This means their origin and history, before they became a playable character. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Etc.

  •  

  • Your Physical Description could use a bit more detail! If you’re unsure what to add, consider including details like height, eye color, hair color and length, clothing style, and other distinctive features. These are all great starting points!

 

My discord is @.hiccup if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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