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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: b0nafiedG#6042
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: The understanding of using outside sources for one's benefits
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: When you are determined to reach an outcome
    Status: Denied

As I was in need of some supplies for a mission I was about to go on my partner suggested we go to the market along the ocean bank she said they there trade to all walks of life. So as me not knowing were else to go I said ok and headed strait there with a boat I stole off some dumb enemy solders, anyways as we got in to the market I could tell they really did trade with everyone here "all walks of life" and as I was thinking to my self on what we needed I heard someone saying hello so I looked up then he askes “What brings you to this lovely city? Adventure? Wealth? Or some grand aspirations to elevate your place in society?" As any normal person I thought that was strange because oh well I didn't really know why but I couldn't tell him about the mission so I said "umm hi yeah I guess I come here for some supply's for a great trip ahead of us"

Character Name: Justin
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: black hair, tomboy-looking pants, and shirt, black sneakers, beefy muscular, very tall 6.6, healthy weight
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography made a reference to the Boston Massacre. As this is a fantasy roleplaying server with no connection to the events of real life, the Boston Massacre did not happen in this server's lore. Please fix this accordingly!
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Physical Description states that your character is 6'6". While this is possible for a human, you must apply within the average height range for humans on LOTC, which is between 4'8" and 6'4". For more information on humans, take a look at the LOTC wiki page!
  • Your Physical Description states that your character wears sneakers. As this is a medieval fantasy roleplay server, this clothing is too modern. Please fix this accordingly!
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself! Also, remember to make sure it connects to his biography!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, or put their thoughts into the response, simply respond to their first words using speech in quotes and at least one action.
  • Your Skin is too modern. Please keep in mind this is a medieval fantasy roleplaying server. Take a look at our skin archive for free skins you can use, or ideas for skins of your own!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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