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Baron_Lewis

Baron

By Baron

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    Discord: OliverAberg#3914
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Barons friedns said he needed to get online beacuase a war is about to happen
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Baron slices Patricks head off with a hard hit with a waraxe
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

-Thanks, im here looking for waepons, do you know any wapons smith?

The gentleman says Idk do you `tuff guy` 

Baron attemps to murder the gentleman with his hands and screams Wth did you just say.

The gentle man screams after the polis and when they come they arrest him

-Baron screams I will neverurn my back on a bully they deserv the thing i do with them

Character Name: Baron_Lewis
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Viking style, White man ,He has a braid, he has old pants ,Wolf skin as a jacket, blue eyes, hes a strong man, 197cm, 160kg, beard, viking tatto.
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Changed Status to Under Review


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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Please select a timezone!

 

→You have examples of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming however you didn’t give the definitions. Please give the definitions to both!

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

→ In your personality traits and quirks you said that Odin is Baron’s religion. Real life nose mythology isn’t in LOTC. Please read the wiki to find a religion that might better fit your character!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

 

→ You wrote your Minecraft Username in your character name spot. Please provide a character name!

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord cobbler#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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