Bassgolem

Good evening--unfortunately your application has been denied, however you are welcome to reapply at any time with the following changes to your application.

Have questions or concerns? Feel free to PM me here at the forums or at my Discord (S.D. Ace#0017) or join the Discord server. The fastest path to a response is typically my Discord, followed by the Discord server if I’m asleep or not home.

I. There is not an altar of Iblees in Arcas, so Antioch could not have found himself there, however the mention of Eshtael is perfectly alright and looks great. Additionally, a 12 year old high elf cannot have been 6’2” at the time, though as an adult that height would be perfectly okay. You need at least two different valid lore references in your application’s biography (Eshtael counts as one, but the Silver City does not as it is a nation.)

II. High elves cannot be as large as Antioch is listed as. 140 lbs is the maximum.

III. Your powergaming definition is incorrect and your metagaming definition should be expanded--might I suggest an example for both? You can check out the wiki page for both here if you wish to find out more.

IV. From what I can tell, Antioch has a tendency to fight whoever he can, which unless he has a very good reason for doing so, is usually considered poor villainy roleplay and can lead to being blacklisted. Please alter this if you choose to reapply.

V. Parts of your biography (especially the line ”He would brawl, kill or even dismember those he found himself in opposition to, by hand or by blade, he would cleave through all he considered himself greater than...”) seem like they are rather powergame-y. Please alter this if you choose to reapply.

I know this can seem like a lot to ask for, but unfortunately it’s how we operate. I hope to see you re-apply soon!

-Sunny