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BbyStevie

By BbyStevie

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Basically roleplaying
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: having a specific goal in gaming?
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

Sir, I'm here for a good time not for a long time. 

Character Name: BabylonBrat
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Large green nose, large blue and green eyes like the waters in Aruba. Tall and wears platform shoes
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Name seems a bit off. Please pick something that adheres to the server's medieval-fantasy theme.
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has a green nose. Please reference elven lore to find something more fitting:
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has platform shoes. Please stay within the medieval-fantasy theme that the server is in.
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking (It should be at least two sentences long)! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you have a look around the wiki! WIKI

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