beamerdox

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Character Biography features a common character trope! Please change that.

• Your Character Biography mentions being born in Canada which isn’t lore appropriate for LOTC

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

• Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

• Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

• Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

• Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

• You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

• Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. 

• Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI