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Beastmoder247
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is when the meaning of the rules are bent in order to find loopholes that allow the player to do what they want
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is when a player blitzes through the game without paying any attention the the story line
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Barius Mordus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: Barius Mordus was born with a fire inside which no one else saw but his parents and a mage that trained him when he was old enough
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Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are not quite right, make sure you use examples to show understanding of the concept. 
  • Your biography is a bit short, make sure you have AT LEAST 7 COMPLETE SENTENCES
  • In your biography, you mention harnessing the fire within, in order for you to learn magic you need to get a teacher in the game and learn magic through role play. Make sure you remove this from your bio (AND YOUR SKIN)
  • Your biography needs at least TWO lore pieces from the server and ONE location. The following links will help you out.
  • Your description needs to be about your characters PHYSICAL appearance, make sure you change this.
  • Your interesting facts CANT INCLUDE MAGIC! and must follow the following format.
    • Positive fact (Strenght, ability, skill, achievement)
    • Neutral fact (Likes, dislikes, hobbies)
    • Negative fact (Weakness, flaws, fears)
  • Make sure your skin is appropriate for the server’s theme in your case it can be simply done by removing the fire ?

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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