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BerdugoMine

By BerdugoMine

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Link#1058
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: basically when IF your charcter needs to be informed about things u cant be told from outside info basically stay in character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: basically making your character overpowered
    Status: Denied

Startled by the massive city i say "wealth and adventure sir"   *grabs bag of weapons and other loot form boat and hides it 

safely under the sand* *starts walking into the city first thing i see are the shops* "this looks like a good place to buy something"

*goes into one of the shop its a potion shop* "what potions do you have?" the shopkeeper: " we got some invisibility and such"

" i would like some invisisbility please" *i pay and get out the shop

Character Name: Silvershot
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: skinny, but agile, purple hair black eyes 5`9 light weight
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Traits say your character has purple hair. She cannot have this since it is an unnatural hair color.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario is in first person, it must be in third person.
  • Your Self Likes and Dislikes need to be more in depth and explained more.
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • https://app.grammarly.com/

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @latte#1608 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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latte

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Your application has unfortunately been denied as you have not made the necessary changes within 24+ hours, as well as the following: 

 

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Physical Traits say your character has purple hair. She cannot have this since it is an unnatural hair color.
  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario is in first person, it must be in third person.
  • Your Self Likes and Dislikes need to be more in depth and explained more.
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • https://app.grammarly.com/

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608 and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: 

 

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